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While browsing deviantART, this photo immediately caught my eye. The tones are wonderful and the vignetting compliments the scene.
My biggest gripe is the composition. This photo would have been a lot more pleasing to the eye if you had followed the rule of thirds and kept the building towards one side of the image rather than centering it. Right now, the scene looks too zoomed in.
Other than that, I think it's a great shot. I love how soft the water looks. This seems to be a very nice location to take photos of, so I'd love to see more! :)
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AntonioGouveia Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much for taking the time to critique my work. I normally try to stick to the rule of thirds, but on this occasion if I had then I would have included a subject that would have distracted from the shot I wanted to take. This is also the reason for zooming in so much.
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TwiggyTeeluck Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I got the comment right after I submitted the critique. It's understandable! :)
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AntonioGouveia Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Not a problem!
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